its funny I haven't been on newgrounds in some time. I saw some emails that I had some people that commented. So cool I read those and read about this being used in a video. This actually was a very pleasant surprise. A funny little animation and the song fit pretty well into this. (Though I never imagined it for a dancer oh hell beggars can't be choosers.) Good job!
Well Hot dog! I'm glad you approve. Honestly, I think you song is what really brought this whole piece together, so thank you! I hope to hear some more music from you soon!
The very fact that you try to defend this lack of effort you call a flash video as your own personal style. This isn't your own art style in fact last I saw in your other video you have taken styles used in DBZ and other animations. Even if you work on it your own actually take pride into your work making excuses by saying you're using an outdated version of flash and using Text-to-speech is no excuse. When you you're self voice act yourself you don't even put emotion into the character you just made it sound like you were reading off a piece of paper instead of making it sound as if its a conversation.
And your writing for the script is just going in circles you have the characters explaining situations almost twice in a row. And using ridiculous lines like "like that guy we talked about yesterday." Or having the lead villain have to exclaim that he has an evil organization all of which are unnecessary when it comes to writing a plot for a story. Not only that you really shouldn't use yourself as the main character in your story it comes of as egotistical and even worse when placed into something that doesn't have any kind of quality to the work. Everything sounds like its made form outdated wav files and why not just save up and get a better microphone or maybe better tools to make better animations instead of trying to make excuses about it. Take pride in your work like thousands do on this site who even do their own projects on their own. With story, characters, voices, and even music. And there's no reason as to why you can't find music and voices on a site like this because the site is filled with thousands of pieces of music people wouldn't mind seeing placed into animations on the site. Me being an artist myself wouldn't half ass something and make an excuse for it. I don't release it until I know its good and that people will like it in some way just telling people your intention was to do bad and its your own is just sad and insulting to those really trying to make it in animation.
Practice your drawings and animations along with voice acting. Have your writing proof read and fixed up to be more interesting so that characters aren't rambling on with nonsense and causing your audience to loose interest and see you as a joke. I'm not doing this to insult you or put you down but you can't seriously think that this is complete work that leaves so much for improvement and planning and refining. You can do better than this anyone could. Like I said take pride in your work and people will see the effort made even if it means working on it for a year or even months.
Wish you had told me this was up when you uploaded it. Anyway great video though I really don't know much about animation its really good for something done in 3 weeks. Glad to help at with contributing content and in the future I'd be glad to make more audio for your animations. By the way the facial expressions were really good.
That'd be great. Thanks for the compliments!
I found this cartoon to be really entertaining and the lines used were very comical yet some how I could help but watch the creepers mouth it was so odd. I found it cute that you had your daughter voice act in the video as well it was really adorable. Keep up the good work.
Very Funny and Quirky
This was a great short and honestly Egoraptor did a great job with voice acting I think it really had to the value of the main character. Along with the animation which was smooth and fluid this short was altogether a great cartoon. I had a good laugh and enjoyed this very much. 9/10
A true masterpiece on Newgrounds.
It's a rare gem to find something on newgrounds that doesn't involve private parts or crude humor or something that is truly entertaining. I can see the time and dedication and attention to the characters in this movie. It was emotionally strong and kept me captivated. Seeing how the story changes so naturally and seeing Lucy become more mature and stronger for herself. And with the inventor how at first you almost grow to dislike him but in the end you see his change of heart and how sorry he was for the way he had been towards Lucy. It was a true and delightful work of art and I truly applaud not only you but the cast involved with the making of this project.
The music kept the right setting, sounds, and the environment were all something to remember. If gave the feel of how winter can be so cold and almost unforgiving and just when you think there is no one there that cares, there is someone who comes into your life that makes a huge impact. I can go on and on about how I loved this movie but I think I've said enough up to this point. I give this movie a 10/10 only cause 10 is as high as I can go. This truly is an excellent flash I just only wish there was more of them around.
Not only was this well written and thought out but it kept me hooked and the story was great from begining to end. It reminded me of an old bed time story and stayed orginal. The music was fitting and I found the narriation fantastic. It's very rare that I find a flash movie on Newgrounds that is truly entertaining and has me looking for more of it. Truly a great movie keep up the good work. 10 stars.
You disgust me.
The fact that Mike Tyson's daughter died out of an accident and since this was a recent event and that you made fun of it is just digusting. They say on this site that if you are going to put a low rating make your comment a creative comment but for something like this all I can say is I hope you get banned and loose any right to post videos on this site. I voted 0 and if I could go lower I would hit the very rock bottom. You digust me.
Yeah public bathrooms are a dread for me. And it's always when I really have to go does it really become a pain. Nothing like shit stained walls when your trying to go.
Random Humor at it's best.
I have to appreciate the randomness of this video I'm not sure what just happened in it but I laughed pretty loud from it.
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